Life is game
Play with sportsman spirit
Life is above any calculation
One who gives most is winner
what wondeful lines............i read it again and again and again
Each mate represents the mirror to the other
Nested in devotion & dedications
Seeds that grows by the consciousness & purity.
the end was the best.......................
wonderful acrostic poem...................with truth and facts blended .................
sir your experience of life speaks in length and breadth
I wish all people onthis planet understands this ultimate truth.....................![]()
these lines so romantic...............that it reminds me of old kishore classic..............
tum jo pakad lo hath mera duniya badal sakta hoon mai
simply great sir.................carry on![]()
nice way of reembering the days of disaster...................
and a wonderful dedication.............to the unlucky people
simply enjoyed the way you presented it....................![]()
the title itself was catchy................needless to talk about the whole poem..................![]()
wAlk FeW sTepS wItH wItH mE dEaR
beautiful lines on love............and expectation
but expectation is the root cause of all sorrow.............
This is not a distant dream when I
know you love me all the more............................
i loved these lines very much
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