wonderful and thought provoking write  nambiar jii

Nice thought provoking poem ..Apt  poem for this shocking day....yash

ajitji..........a contemporary poem ....shows your pain and contempt.

Yes agree with you Ajith. More than peace and Happiness we need more "samshans' and 'karastans'.When will this situation change?

MayaAnil

 Death ,dance and tap your feet
dance on bomb blast tune
we are just immune ,
earlier we cried,
now the tears have dried
our eyes open and red,
we are but, dead.

We have indeed become immune; we hardly seem to bat an eyelid; I guess our senses are numb. Yesterday Hubli, today Jaipur, tomorrow.........where?????????????
Our apathy is shameful.

Ugly indeed! You have hit hard on ugly deeds -

dear Ajit

Your graveyard poem is thematically compelling and very contemporary satirising the human kind for their remorseless performances of death dance through ignorant blood shed all over necessitating the building of samshans and kabrastans for the hindus and muslims , christians and other religious denominations in closer proximity unlike while they were alive. 

Perhaps, you could work on the language to make it more razy!

Regards

Satish 

 dear ajit,
  wonderfully expressed your agony--It has come out very powerfully--Somewhere we are lacking a firm of the POWERS THAT BE to  resolve this continuous death dance with regular periodicity on Indian Soil. We are such a soft state--that we just can not imagine. In the name of VOTES we can not hang a convicted TERRORIST. In the name of VOTES we can not take action against the known terrorists. It is a big shame.
  Yes, I agree let there be more graveyards--till a sense of  revulsion siezes us--We have become a nation of  NINCOMPOOPS. Regards. Rajee.