You may plan ..................but he plans better!

Two little sisters,
with their tiny dreams
and their small fingers,
drew and designed,
the kingdom they would reign,
the future they believed,
a vision they perceived.
Elder sister desired richness and fame,
never ending glory and name,
beauty and wealth,
everlasting youth and health.
Her views crossed the sky of optimism.
They called her ' materialism'.
The younger sister had in mind
to leave the world behind,
like the birds and the bees
be a vagabond
seeking eternal peace.
Floating on the leaf of enthusiasm,
they named her 'spiritualism'.
Unknown to them, not very far
stood the waves of nature,
holding the axe of future,
to cut and chop,
wash their dreams and hope.
The wind of fate smiled,
moved silently and curled around them,
to carry the sand,
of their future map,
on his lap,
to a distant land !
The wise old sun,
enjoyed the sight with fun,
of the two girls,
and the wind ,and the waves,
for he knew,
any one can draw and design
their future map and plan,
but none can reserve it,
nor preserve it,
for the heaven knows to give it
to the man who deserve it!
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Lovely poem nambiar ji...
for the heaven knows to give it
to the man who deserve it!
Liked the end lines..Apt to the title
Cindrella King
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thanks womanslove ,
I knew the title was really good!
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thanks meera
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Thanks muffet,
for the comment and appreciation
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congrats in sharing the third prize with me!
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thanks LP
for the comment and the news!
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congrats...to be third winner of the contest-23#......Aruna
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ajitji
wonderful
loved it
bina
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Hi Ajitnambiar,

That's so nice and different ...The words are haunting !!
anyone can draw and design.
their future maps and designs,
but none can reserve it ,
nor preserve it.......
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Ajit Sir!
this one is SIMPLY SUPERB!
Cheers
MEera
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