
My mind was like a forest
wild, thick and dense
full of mystery and suspense
covered by weeds of failures and problems
small, big and few blown out of proportion.
Struggled to survive my fears and thoughts
left without options, I fought
Yet, tired of my consistent efforts
walked deep into the lonely woods
as fast as I could .
Adamant and impetuous
trying to make my life adventurous
jumping and tumbling ,
hopping and limping
finally left wounded and trembling,
on an unknown path and destination
isolating myself into the weird dreams.
Thorns of adversity pricked reality
and I realized my disability .
A coward killed the atheist within me ,
and a stranger to your magical proximity
tried to seek your affinity!
When all hopes were broken to pieces
half dead and half buried
life encircling to a zero
Its then, you entered as my hero!
I submitted myself to your will
ready to die and be killed,
felt like a man with reputation lost
and character spilled .
You took me in your arms
with soothing words and devotion
as I explored anew feeling
allowing you to lead me
Setting my desires free,
Trusting your path I just followed
Learnt that ego can be swallowed
You filled up my life’s lacuna
Influencing me with your charisma,
guiding me to win the world
Yes, the world within!
Now when I pass through the forest
the forest of my mind
It’s neither wild nor thick nor dense
for your divine touch guides my sense
and says
“O Arjuna , you are one in a million
For krishna is, now your companion"

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thanks meera for the comment..............
a coward killed the atheiist in me...................
meera normally somewhere we are beleivers only because we have a coward within us.....................not because we actually want to beleive in supernatural existence
hope I could justify it properly............
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I like this one a lot :)))
My mind was like a forest
wild, thick and dense
full of mystery and suspense
covered by weeds of failures and problems
small, big and few blown out of proportion.
Struggled to survive my fears and thoughts
left without options, I fought
Yet, tired of my consistent efforts
walked deep into the lonely woods
A coward killed the atheist within me , - :)) makes me smile
I submitted myself to your will
ready to die and be killed,
You took me in your arms
with soothing words and devotion
as I explored anew feeling
allowing you to lead me
Learnt that ego can be swallowed
guiding me to win the world
Yes, the world within!
Now when I pass through the forest
the forest of my mind
It’s neither wild nor thick nor dense
for your divine touch guides my sense
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now sejal..............
stop that...................
its just for fun...................
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thanks sampath sir.................
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This is Sejal
You have become a Kavi
Now u should only keep on writing poems and
become the worlds greatest KAVI
SEJAL SAVIO FERREIRA
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dear ajit, well said.
'when he is there(krishna)
where is the fear?
liked it...
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thaanks dr mahdavi
for the comment and apprn..........
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fantastic..the fears, troubles and ego and how you surrender and conquer them....true life...true path to follow.
very well said....as usual
madhvi
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let me thank you .......for the visit....................
secondly.........this was one of the sweetest comments...........
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please bina say something......................dont be speechless
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