dreams ................... my right ..............my world !
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dreams ................... my right ..............my world !
If dreams could ever have a meaning
let me dance when its raining
with the neighboring boys for fun
and play with the toys and gun
climbing the trees and hill
could be a real thrill !
I wish to play chess,
fight and leave my room in mess
with scrambled bed sheets and covers,
watch movies and reach home
at odd hours!
If dreams could ever come true
god , give me a pair of shoes
which helps me to fly
crossing the limits of the sky
into the space
amidst stars and planets
helping me to trace
the origin of universe
and the reason
a girl child is a curse .
I know it can never be
often I ask "why me?"
tied to social norms
made to lie on the bed of thorns
crucified and then worshipped
and yet ,never free to be born
imaginations tied before it learns to fly
feelings buried , before it dies
words fenced, before it flows
expressions extinguished
before it glows!
I wish to chirp and rest
in a golden nest
designed with parental care
unbiased faith and impartial trust
woven with the twigs of joy
layered with soft grass of empathy
away from unethical desire for a boy.
Let me grow up as a woman
not an owl of bad omen ,
If dreams ever have a place
in this gender race,
I wish to be a bird of love
a symbol of peace, a dove ,
be recognized for my ability,
and like earth be loved , for my
patience and act of responsibility !
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Ajitnambiar - that's the problem with contests. This may sound arrogant - but hey, we are serious about poetry, aren't we? Choose pictures of your own (heaps on the internet).

Or use original pictures you take to write more of yor poems. (Remember to check for copyright first.)
If you need any website references for pictures, just drop me a note.
I say this to you because your writings reveal a very original mind and I think there's a lot there in the mind of yours that will be unlocked when you choose your own stimuli.
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I knew the pic of a girl from white society,,,,,,,,,,,,is no where linked to the poem but since it was a contest..........i had no option left
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ajitnambiar -

a strong poem (and really a poem) about the bias against girls (presumably in India);
the imagery of the crcufixion and then worship is so apt and reflects well the
sufferings of women in the kind of gender bias and persecution that
seems to happen in India.
* The picture is of a white girl and as western societies do not generally have this problem you allude to in your peom, the picture takes away some of the poem's power. A picture of an indian girl, perhaps in the shadows, will be more suitable.
* The second stanza has such a ntaural and strong build-up to its last 2 lines:
and the reason
a girl child is a curse.
Love the poem.
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thanks writer at heart
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hey be4ena ......i will soon vistit your blogs .
i liked potter very much
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okay sav
thanks for the comment
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Ajit ji,

Nice one. Enjoyed reading it.
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ajitji
another ace
loved all lines
these were great
often I ask "why me?"
tied to social norms
made to lie on the bed of thorns
crucified and then worshipped
and yet ,never free to be born
imaginations tied before it learns to fly
feelings buried , before it dies
words fenced, before it flows
expressions extinguished
before it glows!
bina
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Reading it I wondered how every female who read might have felt really a nice one.
Again i tell you whenever you post anything look up on the window youll find " size " and click " medium " your font size irritates cant read it comfortably.
This font size I have taken is " medium "
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thanks yashji for the commet
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